My Paper
Ethos
- acknowledge that I am a freshman, let the audience know who I am.
- add some quotes and let my audience know where I got my sources from
- Let the audience know that I am a student at BYU and have experienced these problems myself
Pathos
- Use imagery to set up a situation
- Give some real life examples
- I need to figure out if my audience better values the grade of the class they receive, or the spiritual
uplift.
Logos
- Better organize my paper so that it flows from topic to topic
- Do not intermix my topics too much so that it gets confusing
- Add more evidence to back up my claim.
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